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Wednesday, 19 August 2015

Our Dream Dog

The Piwakawaka Group have been reading a book about how to choose a pet dog. We have been thinking about different types of dogs and how there are many things to consider when choosing a dog. It is important that your dog matches your life style. The children thought about their dream dog and wrote a description considering all the factors we read about.  


My Dream Dog

My dream dog woud be a great dane his name woud be Zouse. I think he woud be a pet. He woud be a crossbred. I woud hope he liked running around. I woud want him to be a middle aged dog. I want him to be a large dog or a mediam dog. I wat his coat to not shed. I dont want it to shed because I have to clean it up. 

By Hunter

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My dream dog

my dream dog would be a chihuaua because they are relly cute and cuddly. They need a lot of attention. They also need a little bit of food. I want a small chihuahua with brownish witeish skin. My dream dog would be fluffy. I would name it chelsea. I want a well behaved one. I want one that does a little bit of exercise.

By Roxy


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1 comment:

  1. Fantastic writing from two budding writers.

    Hunter - You would need an energetic dog to keep up with you! I can see you have given a reason behind your choice for a dog that doesn't shed it's coat. No one wants to be vacuuming up dog hair all day!

    Roxy - I can see you have used your knowledge of sounds to spell some choice words in your writing. I can just see you carrying around a tiny dog like a chihuahua.

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