In Tawa Class we have been learning about different animal's needs. We have been thinking about the every day needs of our pets at home and have been reading lots of books about animals. For fun we decided to think up some unusual pets and the advantages and disadvantages of those animals as pets. This is what we came up with...
(These stories are as written by the children: I have tried not to edit them as I type so that you may see their true work and progress over time. Please comment on our stories).
(These stories are as written by the children: I have tried not to edit them as I type so that you may see their true work and progress over time. Please comment on our stories).
Dolphins My Ideal Pet
If I could have any pet in the world I would have a dolphin because I would get a ride on it's back and dive in the deep blue sea. I would see colourful fish and stingray and some sharks.
By Nevaeh
Te - Rexx
I would have a te-rexx because it will protect you because it is strong. I will train it so it dosent eat you. It is the king I want to be safe I will get meat for treats. I like Te rexxs. My mum would be save uncle will be save.
I wish I had a t-rex would you I hope so because you could come to me so I can train it I think Dinosaurs are the best
By Noah
Indomisorisrex as a Pet
My Indomisoris rex is a dinosaur. He always eats meat He will whine because he was meat. The meat he eats is Meat Lovers and Stack. I tack him to the hill. He likes to go in the car. He likes to pock his head out of the car. In Then he stomped on the houses But luckily he didnt stand on us.
By Ethan
Tigers
I like tigers because I will try to make it not eat other people or animal's. I would name it... Elsia!
I will also dreww her up like elsia. I will make it do triks like jump in a holahop and make me ride it. I would like it as a pet to.
By Angeli
I really enjoyed reading these imaginative stories. There are so many great and detailed ideas here. Nevaeh has used wonderful descriptive language. Noah has detailed the advantages to having a T-rex as a pet. Ethan has used strong verbs like stomp and whine and let us know a potential disadvantage to having a large dinosaur as a pet (it might stomp on you or your house). Angeli's story uses punctuation well and I love the idea of a tiger doing hula hoop all dressed up!
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What cool pets you have all chosen! I think I would agree with Nevaeh, I'd be a dolphin. I love the water and seeing all those fish would be awesome. I am looking forward to reading more of your work on the blog!
ReplyDeleteThese unusual pets sound fascinating. I like the way you are all thinking of how you would look after them, and the things you would do with them. Wouldn't it be amazing if we really could have pets like this at home or at school as our class pet? Keep up the fantastic imaginative writing Tawa Class! I'm going to have to keep checking your blog to see what interesting things you are get up to next!
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