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Thursday, 17 September 2015

Dogs

I am going to tell you about dogs. dogs are biger than cats because they are. They are fluffy because there are little pese growing throw there skin. They groe biger and biger they also eat food. They go wof wof wof! dogs love digin and...

they love to get dirty! and they do not like the water because it is to cold and to hot and they get to wet. but they love bones and they love dog toys and of cose they love there owners. dogs get trained before the people buy the dogs at pet shops

By Skyla

1 comment:

  1. Great writing Skyla! You have a good introduction to your report and lots of great ideas. My dog loves to get dirty. He loves to jump in smelly water and then he stinks! I can see you have worked hard to put full stops in your writing and you have used an exclamation mark too.

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