Baby Goats
Baby goats are called kids They are called kids because They are goats that are cheeky
What they look like
Goats have black and white fur. Goats have eyes, ears, tail, hoaves, mouth and nose.
were they live
Goats live in New Zealand and then the move to the desert and it is a desert because they ate all the trees and grass.
By Zoe
Zoey I can see you have organised your ideas into paragraphs. You have also used commas correctly in your list of body parts a goat has. What do you think about goats eating all the trees and grass? Is that a good thing?
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ReplyDeleteGreat to see you have sub headings for each category and some interesting information. Well done Bailey and Noah too for giving some feedback. Remember to tell the person what you like about their work as well.
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