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Wednesday, 9 September 2015

Hayley's Writing

As I came home my dogs jamped upon me and wanted my cupcake. He was going cazzy! Oh my god. That was  so so wried. I mern wried. He wagged his tail. I was impaissd and he was ix-sitid. he likes to eat and drike dog food and water. He likes me foowing his ball to him. he likes to play with me.

By Hayley
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 September 2015 at 10:02

    Your story is fantastic ,

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  2. Mr Wilkinson11 September 2015 at 07:35

    I love the words you are trying to use like worried and excited. Well done. Keep up the good work!

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  3. Lee-Anne Waho17 September 2015 at 18:24

    I wonder what flavour cupcake you had. Did the dog end up getting it?

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