Mice are different colours. They have toys to play with. Mice live in houses. the mise are scared from cats. they make holes in the walls. thay have their own home. Some sleep upstairs.
Bailey, you have worked so hard to add lots of detail and have learnt where to put your full stops. I like that you used information from the book you read and also added some other things that you already knew about mice. Fantastic effort Bailey! Keep it up!
Great writing work. I would like it if mice stayed in their own homes and didn't come out. Maybe you could do a survey and ask people what they think about mice. Some people love mice and some people don't...you can add me to the 'don't' list. Thanks for sharing your work.
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Bailey, you have worked so hard to add lots of detail and have learnt where to put your full stops. I like that you used information from the book you read and also added some other things that you already knew about mice. Fantastic effort Bailey! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThank you Miss Diggle. I enjoyed writing about Mice and I am trying hard with my full stops and finger spaces.
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ReplyDeleteYou have some great facts here Bailey, I don't think I would like a mouse at my house though! Would you like one as a pet?
ReplyDeleteGreat writing work. I would like it if mice stayed in their own homes and didn't come out. Maybe you could do a survey and ask people what they think about mice. Some people love mice and some people don't...you can add me to the 'don't' list. Thanks for sharing your work.
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