Your Grandad would be so proud to read this Blake! Great comparisons! The cuddly teddy is a great one. I can see you are really listening to the sounds in words you want to write.
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Your Grandad would be so proud to read this Blake! Great comparisons! The cuddly teddy is a great one. I can see you are really listening to the sounds in words you want to write.
ReplyDeleteSuper poem Blake, well done. You have used very descriptive words to describe a fantastic person. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteAnd remember full stops
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