Snakes live in Australia. they sleep outside. snakes live outside. they have no legs. snakes are really long. they are smaller than a car. snakes are different some snakes have stripes. they have teeth. snakes have a body.
Camryn what a great piece of independent writing. I can tell you have really thought about using full stops at the end of your sentences. You have also varied your sentence beginnings, just like we practised. Ka Pai Camryn! Personally, I am relieved snakes are sleeping outside. I don't want them inside with me!
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Camryn what a great piece of independent writing. I can tell you have really thought about using full stops at the end of your sentences. You have also varied your sentence beginnings, just like we practised. Ka Pai Camryn! Personally, I am relieved snakes are sleeping outside. I don't want them inside with me!
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