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Wednesday, 2 September 2015

The two Poor girls

Once upon a time there lived a beutiful princess that lived in a magical castle. She saw two girls swimming. So she said "you girls can have some gold" and "live in my castle". So the princess showed them there room. So they said "wow thank you". So I gave them more gold. "So wow we were so poor". So I gave them gold dogs. Also gave them a gown, tiara, shoes, gloves, powers.

I gave two gold finding prices. So we lived happily ever after.

By Angeli
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4 comments:

  1. Unknown2 September 2015 at 17:48

    What a great story! I can see you have use descriptive words like magical and beautiful. You have also used speech marks for when your characters are talking. Fantastic!

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  2. Mr Wilkinson3 September 2015 at 09:31

    I think I would live happily ever after if i got given lots of gold too! Great to see you getting lots of ideas written down Angeli! Ka Pai!

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  3. Anonymous10 September 2015 at 10:09

    Thanks mr wilkinson and miss Diggle.

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  4. Anonymous10 September 2015 at 10:12

    Chelsea likes it

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